Your smell, sight and sound
Ginger you linger
in the scent
that soaks the air
and permeates the pillows where
nestle two slender strands of your silky hair
Ginger you linger
in the image
faint foggy dimmer
hovering and floating in the mirror
long after you stood regarding your reflection fair
Ginger you linger
in the echoes
fading but clear
of tiny little laughlets asunder
eons after you dropped them gingerly here
in the scent
that soaks the air
and permeates the pillows where
nestle two slender strands of your silky hair
Ginger you linger
in the image
faint foggy dimmer
hovering and floating in the mirror
long after you stood regarding your reflection fair
Ginger you linger
in the echoes
fading but clear
of tiny little laughlets asunder
eons after you dropped them gingerly here
posted by SK at
10:51 AM
8 Comments:
This composition is an expression of profound pristine love at it's simplest best....!! am convinced that i've never been as much in love with a poet or his poetry......
Ginger shall continue to linger evermore .....in this lifetime and the next......till you have seven lifetimes together......
For purely selfish reasons this is and shall alwayz be my favourite blog post.....forgive me for my ''not-so-objective'' view.....
Love alwayz......
my oh my!
i would have loved to see your face as you read the comment :)
Srijith, if what i hear is correct then his face has only one expression these days!!!
You should still be able to catch it when you come to India next time :)
intersting that you only get to hear about it :)
gives me the idea that it might not be the only expression I might catch, what was that about glass houses and stones :)
have only recently been introduced to your blog. i have read all of them. you write very well. many of your posts have forced me to reflect and introspect.i particularly liked your Prarthana and a few others which have very long titles so i cant list them. wanted you to know that you write very well when you are a trifle happy too. so continue writing cause i'd always like you to be happy.
Thanks! I have some idea whose kind words these are. I have every reason to be happy, in no small measure due to a most valuable gift from you to me. So thanks for everything!
you write very well...but i am sure you already know that. keep up the good work. and God bless the two of u :) o! n did i mention that you write very well?
ooh la la !
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